Here is my review for the Hack-N-Mash / PWP Team Project:
The url I used for my review was http://people.emich.edu/rschwartz/696/pwp/iteration2/pwp.html (Retrieved 03/26/07)
Actually, I started my review by doing research for finding your actual work (after I got several times lost here "PWP National" ... or here "Online Mall" ... you should NOT have external links in your navigation bar, that looks like a navigation !!! Heeellllooooo? ...
Honestly, I was really frustrated that I couldn't find, what I should review ... and your blog post didn't help me at all ... MAYBE you could have mentioned where we should review and what we should review !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I guess, I'm supposed to review that stuff here: http://people.emich.edu/rschwartz/696/pwp/iteration2/events2.html
Weaknesses & Comments:
When I click in the "PWP Local Events List" on e.g. "volleyball - 3/26 9:00 PM" then this crazy window pops up ... I guess, I don't need to talk about the layout! ... and the ONLY value it adds is the information about the location ("Pittsfield Elementary School, 2543 Pittsfield Blvd, Ann Arbor, MI") ... and then, when I click on "map event" ... the side disappears (AND I HAVE NO CLUE WHERE I AM AND HOW I CAN COME BACK TO THIS PAGE... BASICALLY I WAS LOST AGAIN !!!) and I end up with a Google Map and surprise, when I hit the marker, I see this address again "Pittsfield Elementary School, 2543 Pittsfield Blvd, Ann Arbor, MI" (but unfortunately I can't see which event happens here) .... but now I know, where it is ... ups, I forgot, WHEN it was ... but I can't go back ... I am frustrated again :-((((((
Anyway, now being constructive: I mean, obviously you have events and you wants to show your visitors, where and when this events happen. Why do you not simply have a Google Map and have a list with events (which you can retrieve form your Google Calender) next to it and when I click on an event in this list, on the map the marker pops up and tells me, WHICH EVENT takes place WHEN and WHERE. I think that would be user friendly, instead of getting lost in all this pop up things and changing the main pages, ect ...
And then you really should consider to INTEGRATE this map into this main page (http://people.emich.edu/rschwartz/696/pwp/iteration2/pwp.html) !!!
Strengths:
The principle idea, of showing event locations on a map might be useful for your target audience.
All in all, you have a lot of potential for your final iteration.
I am looking forward for it!
-Joern